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this is great
well done..............take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 5, 2004 at 5:36 AM
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very nice
posted by
JustJilly
on July 4, 2004 at 8:05 PM
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as bogart said to henreid in "Casablanca"
we all try; you succeed (more often, anyway!) tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on July 4, 2004 at 7:31 PM
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Thanks Tg
I try
posted by
MiaElla
on July 4, 2004 at 7:29 PM
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miaella
"the boxy depth/ of silent air" -- that's terrific. This is really good. tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on July 4, 2004 at 7:27 PM
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Harvey,
You think everything I write is either erotic or hot...haha. Thanks for reading me. 
posted by
MiaElla
on July 4, 2004 at 6:49 PM
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Highly erotic!
I like it!!
posted by
HarveyG
on July 4, 2004 at 6:45 PM
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Well done,
excellent in fact!
posted by
Original_Influence
on July 3, 2004 at 10:11 PM
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Thanks Symphony, Katray, Tremacc
For falling in love with my poetry...haha...
posted by
MiaElla
on July 3, 2004 at 3:07 PM
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I love what you do with words. You are earthy and raw and vivid and smooth. Full of imagery.
posted by
Tremac
on July 3, 2004 at 12:14 PM
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Wonderful!,
Silky and so descriptive. Love the images invoked.
posted by
Katray2
on July 3, 2004 at 11:59 AM
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this is lovely
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 3, 2004 at 8:04 AM
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