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lovely poem, i'll be reading you again.
posted by
EMDAER
on July 15, 2004 at 2:37 AM
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AWESOME poem!! 
posted by
Tanoolicious
on July 14, 2004 at 1:49 PM
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teddypoet,
That was so beautiful. I think these might be tears in my eyes. Thank you.
posted by
MiaElla
on July 14, 2004 at 12:38 PM
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this speaks so deeply to me
Sweet Mia,
just how profoundly words give sight
of escape from the room of tiny air and no birds singing
deeply, indeed
and I walk through the seasons
remembering
-your words a delicious recall
Excellent, Dear Lady.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 14, 2004 at 12:34 PM
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this is brilliant
well done...............take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 14, 2004 at 10:51 AM
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It is but a dream
You are a goddess.
Your words are a meal - but yes, I'd still like to come over for dinner.
-poetkitty
posted by
poetkitty
on July 13, 2004 at 2:05 PM
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Wow...
just wow.
posted by
BlushFussy
on July 13, 2004 at 9:02 AM
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A shakingly sad tour . . .
beautifully executed!
posted by
HarveyG
on July 12, 2004 at 7:52 PM
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I can see why you are a published author.
Very beautiful words. Take care
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on July 12, 2004 at 8:35 AM
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I echo everyone here
Nice poem. I loved the imagery, especially of the old man ticking like a clock. It's very effective because you see, and show, the details (which is actually fairly hard to do, as I've come to discover
).
IRS
posted by
InherentRights
on July 11, 2004 at 10:24 PM
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MiaElla
Wowie!! I recognized that place, what wonderful writing.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 11, 2004 at 8:59 PM
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Very artistic...............Conscience
posted by
Conscience
on July 11, 2004 at 7:16 PM
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This is good!
posted by
Original_Influence
on July 11, 2004 at 6:53 PM
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I agree
This is good writing. I love it!
posted by
Sherri_G
on July 11, 2004 at 5:43 PM
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You are Fantastic!!!!!!!!! I love your poetry!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
Melodystar
on July 11, 2004 at 4:05 PM
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