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VIVA
Thank you, I'm so honored by the compliments.
posted by
MiaElla
on July 26, 2004 at 7:09 PM
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You are a very talented poet
I am in awe of your work
cheers VIVA
posted by
VIVA_LA_KATZE
on July 26, 2004 at 4:21 PM
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hehehe
posted by
JustJilly
on July 23, 2004 at 7:58 PM
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Can't get with the drug thing, but as usual I love what you do with words. You are truly gifted.
posted by
Tremac
on July 22, 2004 at 1:56 PM
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Your writing is very clever,
it is interesting how it pulls in so many ideas but winds back clearly. I love it! Take care!
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on July 22, 2004 at 8:30 AM
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Your poem
Very very sensual, hot, hypnotic. More please.
posted by
Vibrance
on July 21, 2004 at 9:21 AM
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terrific poem of addiction/love
reminds me of Lou Reed's "Heroin" tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on July 20, 2004 at 1:44 PM
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Awesome poem....................Conscience
posted by
Conscience
on July 19, 2004 at 9:31 PM
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awesome.............
posted by
Star5_
on July 19, 2004 at 8:56 PM
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GREAT poem!!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on July 19, 2004 at 12:51 PM
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Thanks everybody!
Having never done drugs myself - I was scared to venture into the unknown...lol...thanks for the 
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posted by
MiaElla
on July 19, 2004 at 12:21 PM
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Help keep that man erectus...love Scriber
posted by
scriber
on July 19, 2004 at 11:58 AM
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I agree very mystical images! Great Poem !
posted by
Melodystar
on July 19, 2004 at 8:49 AM
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Opium eh..hate to say it but my whole life is wrapped up in drugs right now
Great Poem
posted by
Rogelliox
on July 19, 2004 at 8:45 AM
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wow mia
excellent imagery~makes me think of passages of Amy Tan's The Bonesetter's Daughter. This poem has a very asian, mystical quality with the truth slapping you right in the face.
posted by
Gheeghee
on July 19, 2004 at 8:45 AM
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this is great
take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 19, 2004 at 2:25 AM
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Outstanding! Did I say you are good? lemme check...by the way? wow!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Mia
I tried, I really did -- I'm just not stoned enough yet!
posted by
HarveyG
on July 18, 2004 at 10:10 PM
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