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Thanks for the ride...
on the street corners...
posted by
void-is
on August 4, 2004 at 1:51 PM
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Interesting. Very abstract and surreal...
posted by
Tremac
on August 4, 2004 at 1:51 PM
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mia, nice expressions
posted by
Star5_
on August 4, 2004 at 1:05 PM
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Mia...
found some inspiration! Introflection through observation~great poem. 
Gina
posted by
Gheeghee
on August 4, 2004 at 9:58 AM
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Powerful....describes it best!
posted by
Original_Influence
on August 4, 2004 at 5:56 AM
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Thank you Buxom
for the compliment. Instead of "you make me feel like dancing" .....lol....it's "you make me feel like writing."
posted by
MiaElla
on August 4, 2004 at 5:36 AM
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I was going to comment on the 'acrylic whore' line in particular, too ...
wonderful stuff with such a unique voice - this is powerful poetry indeed, MiaElla :) xx.
posted by
Moohahaha
on August 4, 2004 at 1:30 AM
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those one sentence stanzas
reducing me to nothing... the acrylic whore. great stuff. have you got your mojo back? tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on August 3, 2004 at 10:35 PM
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