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Thanks for the visual...

I needed that, such a thing could raise the dead...

posted by jimmy68 on September 9, 2004 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

Still clogged up...

but I don't feel too bad today, still going to Yosemite agin this weekend

Thanks!

posted by jimmy68 on September 9, 2004 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

it does sound like a song

posted by scriber on September 9, 2004 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks scriber...

It's so funny. I was at work, listing to Melissa Etheridge....and some things Billy told me came into my mind....suddenly, this was born. Right there on a sticky note. My muse seeks curious communion. :)

posted by Temple on September 9, 2004 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

temple--one of your best i think...

posted by scriber on September 9, 2004 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

Cass, wow, that took some getting used to!

I understand though. Denver it was trains...well, and gunshots. Here it's helicopters and hookers! Meowing hookers even! Seriously. Gotta put that in a post. :)

posted by Temple on September 8, 2004 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Tapsel, thanks for reading and commenting!

posted by Temple on September 8, 2004 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Quirk. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for reading! I'm still sendin' hugs your way.

posted by Temple on September 8, 2004 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

Temple - This poem is great.

posted by TAPS. on September 8, 2004 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

Temple - I have a railway line across from my driveway. The trains run all day and half the night, but I'm sort of used to them now....

posted by Ca88andra on September 8, 2004 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice poem Temple!! Love, Quirk

posted by Julia. on September 7, 2004 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

It's true Bella, trains don't have the same presence as they used to.

But every little country town...rural area...out here in the states has trains. Even in Denver I could hear the trains in the middle of the night. Something simple about them.

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

I miss trains........

No I don't mean I am tardy, I mean there are no trains to catch

posted by beachbelle on September 7, 2004 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Tanoo....

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the flower, too.

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

wow, Teddy...!

I am humbled and honored. Thank you!

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

wanderlust Jimmy, indeed

What summer daydreams are made of. You're welcome for the feedback, anytime.

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

grab a parachute, cowboy cargo

I like jumping off of planes much better anyway. :) Sometimes just remembering slow country days watching trains can bring us solace.

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Welcome Brimstone!

Well, if I can woo a wanna be hobo, I've succeeded! Thanks for reading and commenting.

posted by Temple on September 7, 2004 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful poem Temple

posted by Tanoolicious on September 7, 2004 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

Temple,

Lady, you have tapped into my Soul with this one! Perfect...what is that..this is soooooooooo much better!

-tp

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on September 7, 2004 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

Cool...Wanderlust...

thanks for the feedback