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Mia,
Really holds the reader, Lady! Great as ever!
-tp
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 11, 2004 at 1:43 AM
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This is excellent!!!
posted by
Melodystar
on September 10, 2004 at 7:54 AM
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this is excellent
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 10, 2004 at 3:19 AM
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Mia, I slid right into this one. A slippery feel of familiarity. Very nice.
posted by
Tremac
on September 9, 2004 at 10:03 PM
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Nice poem!
posted by
Original_Influence
on September 9, 2004 at 7:51 PM
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Nice work!!
posted by
Holy_Grail
on September 9, 2004 at 7:22 PM
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Great work capturing that moment.
I really get the unopened bills on the counter top.
posted by
Temple
on September 9, 2004 at 7:16 PM
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Very nice.
posted by
RachelAnna
on September 9, 2004 at 7:03 PM
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posted by
Ariala
on September 9, 2004 at 6:41 PM
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