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Thank you teddypoet.
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 10, 2004 at 4:37 PM
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Great stuff.
-tp
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 10, 2004 at 1:42 PM
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What do you mean Sky5 ??
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 9, 2004 at 10:48 PM
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yes, you are messing with million heads.....it's cool.....
posted by
Star5_
on November 9, 2004 at 10:44 PM
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Alf,
You are much, much too kind. Either that, or you're messing with my head.
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2004 at 11:32 PM
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Well Quirky, you must be a natural then.
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 7, 2004 at 11:12 PM
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Alf,
I'm a poetry ignoramus, having only just written my first poem a month or so ago.
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2004 at 11:05 PM
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Thanks spitfire..
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 7, 2004 at 10:53 PM
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Thanks Quirky...I have read your poems...
what are you talking about?
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 7, 2004 at 10:52 PM
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ALF,
Great poem! I feel like I could have written this myself...although not nearly as poetically as you have, since poems are not my strong suit. But I can certainly identify with what you've written. 
posted by
Julia.
on November 7, 2004 at 7:56 PM
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Bravo, my friend. Bravo.
posted by
SpitFire70
on November 7, 2004 at 1:27 AM
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Dainty???? HAHAHA I love your manly picture, Alf.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2004 at 4:13 PM
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That's good T-Mom.....
since I am one...a man I mean, I don't want to sound too dainty. lol
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 6, 2004 at 4:10 PM
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Alf - Very intense. Loved the ending. You can tell its a man's poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2004 at 4:03 PM
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Exquisitly painful?? Yes. I know what you mean, yes.
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 6, 2004 at 3:33 PM
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Alf -
some pain is exquisite, no?
posted by
Hollee
on November 6, 2004 at 3:31 PM
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Thanks Ariala..
posted by
A_Norseman
on November 6, 2004 at 3:23 PM
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Awesome poem!
posted by
Ariala
on November 6, 2004 at 3:22 PM
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