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Witchflower...Thank you very much.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 14, 2004 at 8:34 PM
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That's wonderful!
Stirs the emotions. You have a great gift.
posted by
Witchflower
on December 12, 2004 at 11:05 PM
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Hollee....thank you very much. :)
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 6, 2004 at 8:03 AM
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Quite lovely . . . . .
posted by
Hollee
on December 6, 2004 at 5:15 AM
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So romantic and warm Alf. Truly beautiful!
posted by
Katray2
on December 5, 2004 at 7:09 PM
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Freerain... Thank you very much... I actually
considered breast, but I decided chest sounded better, oh well. Thanks again.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 5, 2004 at 9:46 AM
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Beautiful Poem, Norseman
lovely imagery, with brevity, crisp and deep with emotion--tho--it's alright to say "breast" when speaking of a woman's chest. 
Peace,
Freerain
posted by
freerain
on December 5, 2004 at 8:46 AM
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Alf,
excellent stuff!
posted by
Original_Influence
on December 4, 2004 at 8:26 PM
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Justsouno...I am glad you enjoyed it.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 3, 2004 at 3:47 PM
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ALF
I could see the vicking ship, both of them ooooohhhhh it is beautiful.
posted by
Justi
on December 3, 2004 at 12:37 PM
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Georgia, thank you so much. Always nice to see you walking
amongst my poems.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 6:40 PM
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I especially like the way the maiden and the warrior gaze at the North Star and feel united! When I look at the stars, I think the same kind of thoughts ... how no matter what our cultures, we look with awe at the same sky and realize that the infinite unites us! How beautiful!
posted by
Georgia
on December 2, 2004 at 6:35 PM
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Loan-Lady...I very much appreciate your kind comments.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 6:17 PM
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The maiden could be some wife here waiting at the shore for her beloved to come home from Iraq, or some ancient Valcaree ... Beautiful imagery and loving thoughts
posted by
the-loanlady
on December 2, 2004 at 1:04 PM
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Alf,
Liked it? If that isn't the understate of the year!
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 11:49 AM
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Quirky....Thank you for noticing. Glad you liked it.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 8:30 AM
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Alf,
Oh, that was an incredible poem all right. The fair maiden who captures the Viking's heart would be a lucky lady indeed.
P.S. And you even used the "L" word--you never cease to surprise and delight. 
posted by
Julia.
on December 2, 2004 at 8:28 AM
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Gypsyredhead33....
Thank you...I am glad you enjoyed it.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 8:22 AM
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Nicely done Norse God!
As always I should say. This reminded me a bit of that song that says," And even though I know how very far apart we are, it helps to think we might be wishing on the same bright star..." I always did like romantic poetry and anything with vikings and fair maidens are just a bonus!
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 2, 2004 at 8:19 AM
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Suomynona...
Thank you very much, you made me smile. Maybe it's too early in the moring for me, but I'm not sure what you mean by what happened in 1969...are you speaking of going on with second grade and all that?
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 8:12 AM
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Alf
Is there an end to your literary genius! A poet as well....I'm glad you have so many different blogs as at this time of night in Australia...8:20pm....there is not much going on around here. It is always a treat to discover a favourite 'author' has other surprises in store than those I am already familiar with....and waiting for the next installment of....hint....hint.....need to know Alf....what happened next in 1969?
posted by
suomynona
on December 2, 2004 at 2:19 AM
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Tanoolicious...thanks for noticing so late at night.
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 2, 2004 at 2:10 AM
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Wow, this is an awesome poem Alf!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on December 2, 2004 at 2:03 AM
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