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Dave,
Thank you very much!
posted by
Julia.
on December 21, 2004 at 9:12 PM
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Quirky, it has a mythical feel to it, this poem, loaded with symbolism. Lady of Shallott, King Arthur, that sort of resonance. Nice writing.
Dave.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on December 21, 2004 at 3:23 PM
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mike-pilarte,
um...I dunno...I've been "write here" all along, lol. Anyway, thank you very much for your compliment!
posted by
Julia.
on December 20, 2004 at 1:49 PM
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How come I haven ever read your work before. This is awesome!!!!! You are a great writer!
posted by
michael_pilarte
on December 20, 2004 at 10:31 AM
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klara,
wow, thanks for that exceptional comment!! Passion and inspiration does have a certain way of bringing out the emotion in the writing, that's for sure. Thanks again!
posted by
Julia.
on December 15, 2004 at 11:47 AM
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You're right, this is the best. The others are fantastic too, very well
written, but this one contains an edge of emotionality and passion that is absolutely astounding. I can't write poetry at all, and with this one, I'm exceedingly jealous. You were obviously lost in the throes of the writing while you wrote it, and it does show.
posted by
KlaraRoberts
on December 15, 2004 at 11:32 AM
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Gypsy,
Hmmm. Well, he does have a very nice sword--or so I'm told. lol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 13, 2004 at 11:07 AM
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I'm guessing Alf
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 13, 2004 at 10:50 AM
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Does anyone want to know which blogger inspired this poem??
posted by
Julia.
on December 13, 2004 at 10:40 AM
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electric,
thanks very much!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 7:04 PM
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katray,
You (and Alf) have just made my day!!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 7:03 PM
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Alf!!!
Oh thanks! I finally heard the bells ring, lol!!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 7:02 PM
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Witchwriter,
good to see you, and thanks for the compliment.
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 6:54 PM
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Ca88, thanks.
That's one of my favorite parts.
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 6:53 PM
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Symphony, thanks, glad you liked it.
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 6:50 PM
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excellent poetry..............
i like your style of poetry............passionate and heartfelt desire in this peice........
posted by
electric_light_ambition
on December 9, 2004 at 4:25 PM
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Whoa Quirky, such silkily suggestive imagery and warm passion felt.
I second what Alf said, you have those wings and are flying high.
posted by
Katray2
on December 9, 2004 at 4:08 PM
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Quirky...
Exqisite! Your poetry wings are well earned now. >>>bells ringing<<< This poem exhibited fabulous imagery and painted quite a picture of love born passion. Plus the whole sword thing was dy-no-mite. Well done, great job. ::::::::applause::::::::
posted by
A_Norseman
on December 9, 2004 at 2:39 PM
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Very good.........
I like it a lot....
posted by
WitchWriter
on December 9, 2004 at 2:20 PM
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Well done, I could see the soulful lord of the sea reaching out....
posted by
Ca88andra
on December 9, 2004 at 2:02 PM
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wow this is great
well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on December 9, 2004 at 1:25 PM
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Thanks
posted by
Tanoolicious
on December 9, 2004 at 12:17 PM
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Tanoo,
thanks so much!! And what I said to Ariala goes for you, too!!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 12:11 PM
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oooooh Quirky this is lovely!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on December 9, 2004 at 11:48 AM
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Ariala,
Thanks for the kudos--your opinion on poetry means a lot to me!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 11:39 AM
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Whoa, bravo! I really like this one!
posted by
Ariala
on December 9, 2004 at 11:28 AM
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scriber,
I've been sleeping on it...now I want to sleep WITH it...lol.
Thanks for reading!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 10:20 AM
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But Gypsy--
I didn't hear the bell ring. lol.
Thanks again!
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 10:17 AM
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Quirky--maybe you better sleep on that thought...nicely done...love
posted by
scriber
on December 9, 2004 at 10:15 AM
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You had them all along!
Your embracing of your inner poet is showing.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 9, 2004 at 10:03 AM
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Gypsy,
Thanks for the encouraging words, I AM embracing my inner poet. Perhaps this poem will earn me those coveted "poet wings"--?? lol.
posted by
Julia.
on December 9, 2004 at 10:02 AM
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Quirky,
This was great! I liked it alot. Keep up the poetry writing, you've a definite talent for it.
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on December 9, 2004 at 9:37 AM
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