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Hello Kingmi, I have my new poem......
posted by
Star5_
on January 14, 2005 at 9:06 PM
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Wiley, Thanks!
posted by
kingmi
on January 14, 2005 at 8:41 PM
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Kingmi
Yup, King is good for this kind of entry, fantastic my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 14, 2005 at 8:39 PM
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Thank you, saul!
posted by
kingmi
on January 14, 2005 at 6:29 PM
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Amazing, kingmi,
your imagery is remarkable. What great work.
posted by
saul_relative
on January 14, 2005 at 6:28 PM
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9457sue, Hey, I'm looking for your blog just now, dude!
posted by
kingmi
on January 14, 2005 at 6:21 PM
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hello kingmi
posted by
Star5_
on January 14, 2005 at 6:18 PM
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Georgia, thank you. I can't remember the details. I'll get someone to
refresh my memory tomorrow!
posted by
kingmi
on January 12, 2005 at 7:52 PM
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Kingmi - sorry - that should be "Guadalupe".
posted by
Georgia
on January 12, 2005 at 7:13 PM
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This is so profound! Kingmi, have you read the story of Our Lady of Guadelupe and Juan Diego? It helps me find peace in all of this.
posted by
Georgia
on January 12, 2005 at 7:12 PM
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beezus, Now I am at a loss. Thank you!
posted by
kingmi
on January 12, 2005 at 7:08 PM
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i'm impressed.
you have a clear, strong voice. i hope i remember your name and come back for more.
posted by
beezus
on January 12, 2005 at 7:07 PM
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Quirky, Yes! Thank you very much!
posted by
kingmi
on January 12, 2005 at 12:43 PM
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Kingmi, a great entry for the challenge! This was sort of like a cross between poetry and prose.....but you have great strength with imagery and word combinations.....well done!
posted by
Julia.
on January 12, 2005 at 9:56 AM
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AJ, thank you!
posted by
kingmi
on January 11, 2005 at 4:15 AM
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I've Both Written & Read Poems About This Irony...
...and yours is, likely, at the top--either tying with or slightly beating Mark Lindsay's song about the Cherokees!
Write On!
AJ
posted by
Ainsley_Jo_Phillips
on January 10, 2005 at 10:32 PM
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ghe ghe, thanks!
posted by
kingmi
on January 9, 2005 at 4:19 PM
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kngmi...you don't have to, I took care of it! Thanks! Great work here!
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 9, 2005 at 1:25 PM
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Klara, Thank you!
posted by
kingmi
on January 9, 2005 at 10:34 AM
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Symphony, thans for reading!
posted by
kingmi
on January 9, 2005 at 10:33 AM
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A different side of you, kingmi! I didn't know you wrote like this.
I agree, powerful and provocative.
posted by
KlaraRoberts
on January 9, 2005 at 10:32 AM
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ghee, what do I do post it again?
posted by
kingmi
on January 9, 2005 at 10:29 AM
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is this the one? The link didn't take me here, but I recognize the words..
this is great. Thanks!!!!!!! woohoo we're smokin now!
posted by
Gheeghee
on January 9, 2005 at 9:50 AM
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wow.....powerful
I could feel..wow....good writing....wow...take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 9, 2005 at 4:20 AM
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Thanks for defining it so well for me.
The rich language blinded me.
Ann.
posted by
A-and-B
on January 9, 2005 at 12:01 AM
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Ann, I guess this is undeveloped. What I was trying to get across was that the teacher assumed she would only go to Jr. College, as opposed to University, because she was minority.
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 11:19 PM
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Going to college is salvation?
Education to save the world.
A fitting message from a teacher.
Ann.
posted by
A-and-B
on January 8, 2005 at 10:47 PM
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Kell, thank you.
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 10:39 PM
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Hi Kingmi
Very descriptive...crawling skin, swelling chest, fractured skulls! Wow!
kelli
posted by
Kelli
on January 8, 2005 at 5:11 PM
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Wham, you are never speechless! Thank you.
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 4:02 PM
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kingmi, I am speechless. Nice work!
posted by
WHAMENATOR
on January 8, 2005 at 4:00 PM
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Alf, Thank you. You are right. Now I have to go to sing!
"Risiing like a Phoenix out of Arizona!" Later, dude.
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 3:56 PM
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Kingmi...
That was a lot of emotion you let go of there and for it to be heard and felt by others....crying is an appropriate response.
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 8, 2005 at 3:50 PM
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Alf and Taps, I'm crying over here. I don't know why! Thanks.
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 3:46 PM
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kingmi - sometimes the sad songs are the best songs. We learn from the sad songs when our hearts are touched.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 8, 2005 at 3:44 PM
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Kingmi...
I enjoyed this very much, quite a tapestry you wove there my friend! Excellant!
posted by
A_Norseman
on January 8, 2005 at 3:43 PM
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Gyps, thank you!
posted by
kingmi
on January 8, 2005 at 3:34 PM
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King...
Very nicely done!
posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on January 8, 2005 at 3:33 PM
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