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Hiya! Thanks for reading my attempt at poetry 
...hee hee
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 28, 2005 at 1:16 PM
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sssssssssssssssso beautiful
posted by
Star5_
on January 28, 2005 at 10:41 AM
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Kelli ...
Thanks for your comments, they are much appreciated. I love reading poetry but never thought of writing it ~ so I have been giving it a novice whirl 
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 28, 2005 at 4:12 AM
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Saying I hate you is to some saying I love you, no matter how you might
put it. Saying I hate you yourself can really mean the opposite too. love=hate. Nice poem!
posted by
Kelli
on January 28, 2005 at 4:05 AM
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WitchWriter...
thanks a bunch ... 
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 27, 2005 at 12:18 PM
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All I got to say is....
I love it....
posted by
WitchWriter
on January 27, 2005 at 12:16 PM
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Sweet ...
I started to dabble in poetry recently. I don't know the form, I don't know the rules. I am just trying it out (I wake up from sleep and have a great verse and I don't even bother writing it down). I better break out a note pad for my bedside table. I think I should start working on the polishing. Thanks for your comments ....
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 26, 2005 at 1:25 PM
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Dark D., complexities, dancing with words, eternities...all these are the
gateways to infinities...my favorite playground... ;-)
posted by
void-is
on January 26, 2005 at 1:20 PM
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void-is...
Thanks! What paths were you thinking? Just curious. It just flew onto the screen ....When I reread it I thought that too.
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 26, 2005 at 1:14 PM
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Dark D. Very well done! Some interesting paths leading away..............
to infinity...
posted by
void-is
on January 26, 2005 at 10:33 AM
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Slendah...
Thank you for your kind words ...
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 26, 2005 at 7:21 AM
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You have a very eloquent style to your poetry writing.
A style I wish I could emulate.
posted by
Slendah
on January 26, 2005 at 6:35 AM
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Scriber...
That was my mind as well ... So readers do decode the authors words once in awhile. I know it wasn't a complicated poem or anything ~ I wrote it real quick. I never did proof it or add spice ... (A two minute poem) ... Tongues are great! 
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 25, 2005 at 2:27 PM
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The poem starts with the powerful kissing image; i see tongue.
posted by
scriber
on January 25, 2005 at 1:43 PM
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scriber...
Thanks ... I know that poetry/prose is decoded by the reader ~ sometimes I yearn to know what the reader gets from it ...
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 25, 2005 at 9:05 AM
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heavy on the tongue, nicely done.
posted by
scriber
on January 25, 2005 at 8:55 AM
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Thanks Symphony ...
I am new to the poetry thing ...
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on January 25, 2005 at 5:52 AM
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creative deep meaningful writing....well done
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 25, 2005 at 5:45 AM
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