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poetjpb
o.k. then, inside this house
inside a kitchen cupboard
inside on a shelf of that cupboard
inside a pan on the shelf
sits a pie plate and inside the pieplate
is the residue of a blueberry pie inside it
that you baked inside this kitchen
inside this house.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 22, 2005 at 8:40 AM
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thanks for commenting
posted by
poetjpb
on March 20, 2005 at 8:58 PM
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inside my mind are cobwebs
how the cobbs got in there I'll never know.
posted by
Whacky
on March 20, 2005 at 7:48 PM
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Clever! Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Justi
on March 20, 2005 at 3:47 PM
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lol
posted by
poetjpb
on March 19, 2005 at 4:20 PM
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Great idea...
I think I may have gone inside my mind before, I will have to check the archives.
posted by
food4thought
on March 19, 2005 at 4:02 PM
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