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oh, this is very good... I like this
posted by
Metta
on May 13, 2005 at 10:29 AM
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Powerful, Temple.
Very tight. Images are poignant. Loved it.
posted by
saul_relative
on April 30, 2005 at 7:12 AM
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I really enjoyed your work. Will you be writing any more in the near future? I have just started adding my poems to Blogit. Have a read, I think you will enjoy them!!!
posted by
Stewart_Harding
on April 10, 2005 at 11:08 AM
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Michael
If you mean the x-ray, yes, I got it. I didn't know you were injured in Iraq since I spoke with you so close to the time you went home. It looks terribly painful and complicated. I'm sorry that you have to go through it, and I hope you heal well and are feeling okay. I'm also glad you are seeing that your wife is truly a gift to you and that she loves you very much. I hope that your marriage gets better every day and you can love her and take good care of her when you are well, also. Best wishes.
posted by
Temple
on April 8, 2005 at 6:07 PM
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did you get my email???
posted by
michael_pilarte
on April 8, 2005 at 9:42 AM
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Sweet Temple, this is so deep...
Great work, Dear Lady...by the way, Happy Birthday!!
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 7, 2005 at 4:05 PM
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I really like this poem. I have just started putting some of mine here on Bloggit. Have a read, I think you will enjoy them.
posted by
Stewart_Harding
on April 5, 2005 at 9:39 AM
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The profound arena
of death is vast, yet you sum it up in a few lines.
Wish I could say more. Feeling a little breathless.
posted by
Diversion4u
on April 4, 2005 at 2:54 PM
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This made me think about things
in a new way. Great poem. Says much with few words. Take care Temple
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on April 1, 2005 at 11:16 AM
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Death is certainly a thief my sweet...
thief of time, of love, of laughter and of joy; but it comes for us all, and we can get all those things back on the other side...I hope.
posted by
jimmy68
on March 28, 2005 at 4:53 PM
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**author's note: this is personal, not about anything in the public now
posted by
Temple
on March 28, 2005 at 12:17 AM
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