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Thank you all for the
wonderful comments! And WhiteJedi, you are perceptive, indeed. I wrote this poem with my first-born child (a daughter) in mind.
Thanks again,
FR
posted by
freerain
on July 7, 2005 at 6:58 AM
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I liked the way you personified the lily. She becomes a strong individual through your words. Good job.
posted by
WhiteJedi
on July 6, 2005 at 2:17 PM
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Absolutely lovely!
posted by
Original_Influence
on July 5, 2005 at 7:39 PM
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Free
lovely gifts...the lily to you, the poem to us
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on July 5, 2005 at 8:58 AM
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Come visit under the shadetree
And sit a spell with me. For here I will tell you Of things that might still be.
posted by
stpwriter1
on July 5, 2005 at 4:02 AM
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How very lovely
posted by
stpwriter1
on July 5, 2005 at 4:01 AM
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beautifully written..... lovely word flow. :)
posted by
mmm-w
on July 4, 2005 at 9:15 PM
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