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Mia,
Of course he did Mia.
And such beautiful work 
posted by
myrrhage_
on August 1, 2005 at 1:55 PM
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Interested in a poetic challenge?
It's beneficial to all who participate :) Hope to see you there. http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Accounts/BlogSource.aspx?blog=Nuttimilius
posted by
Nuttimilius
on July 30, 2005 at 4:21 AM
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I like your writing.
Keep on writing. I like your narrative piece of writing.
posted by
Contina
on July 28, 2005 at 3:28 PM
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You are welcome!
posted by
Georgia
on July 27, 2005 at 10:00 AM
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Georgia
That's beautiful! Thank you
I'm truly touched!
posted by
MiaElla
on July 27, 2005 at 9:19 AM
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Dear MiaElla,
I was cleaning up my poetry blog last night came across this poem I wrote months ago but never posted when I was reading your blog entries about your brother's death. It's not the greatest poem, but it did come from the heart. I enjoy your writing!
Our collective love tumbles
into the depression
left by the skidding truck;
that moment when vertigo met constellation
and a brother’s life was taken.
When tragedies like this
narrow our field of vision,
we see through the fog
and concentrate on the aurora.
posted by
Georgia
on July 27, 2005 at 8:25 AM
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