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love it!
posted by
littlemspickles
on August 7, 2005 at 2:26 AM
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Take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 5, 2005 at 11:41 AM
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Mia, if I didn't know better....
I'd wonder if this was first hand. ;) That's good writing.
posted by
Temple
on August 5, 2005 at 6:01 AM
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MiaElla..
Very nice! I could only dream of writing like that! Sh** I can't rhyme what am I saying...:) Good job!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on August 5, 2005 at 5:57 AM
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Very sweetly sensual MiaElla
posted by
Katray2
on August 4, 2005 at 3:20 PM
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Elegantly romantic
Well, you're now the first member on my "blog list". I'm not sure I've read poetry as good as this in classes!
posted by
Jojapo
on August 4, 2005 at 3:17 PM
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Krisles
Thanks!
posted by
MiaElla
on August 4, 2005 at 10:45 AM
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MiaElla
Very, very nice....I loved the feel of this.
posted by
Krisles
on August 4, 2005 at 10:44 AM
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Quirky,
That's a good idea =)
posted by
MiaElla
on August 4, 2005 at 10:28 AM
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Mia--
I know what you mean--I quit posting in my poetry blog and now post a poem in my others blogs once in awhile.
posted by
Julia.
on August 4, 2005 at 10:18 AM
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Mia--now for a cuppa coffee and smiles.
posted by
scriber
on August 3, 2005 at 3:29 PM
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mystic
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
MiaElla
on August 3, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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Quirky
Thanks...it's hard to write poetry when I think no one is reading it...lol
posted by
MiaElla
on August 3, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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wonderful...very powerful lines, and great imagery, nice use of sensuality
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on August 3, 2005 at 11:19 AM
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This is so beautiful and romantic. I esp. like the sounds in this line:
Draws me to the light of day
Like a moth to the moon
posted by
Julia.
on August 3, 2005 at 11:16 AM
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