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Passionflower
Honey, I have been blogging almost everyday this week!!! What are you talking about? Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 13, 2005 at 9:25 AM
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How come you haven't written anything lately??
Too busy?
posted by
Passionflower
on August 13, 2005 at 8:56 AM
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you are very talented. this one is beautiful. i 've definitely felt like that. actually, i've felt like that of a lot, of late
posted by
Vanidad
on August 12, 2005 at 9:05 PM
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strong song.... built with finesse...
tender crescendoes with more drawn from less.
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on August 12, 2005 at 7:35 PM
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roses and stuff.
Tx for the roses. A comment would be great too. I really want to hear your comments!!! Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 11, 2005 at 7:51 PM
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posted by
daisysface
on August 11, 2005 at 1:14 PM
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posted by
RedHeadedGypsy
on August 10, 2005 at 6:35 PM
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PhyllisTale - thank you so much- It is one of my favorite piece.
I need to write something news. Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 10, 2005 at 11:50 AM
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This has a great rhythm, great movement. And I relate. You are very very talented! I am jealous!
posted by
PhillysTales
on August 10, 2005 at 9:07 AM
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Sliderr
resonnance is a good word. One that I appreciate as a compliment when songwriting. Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 10, 2005 at 5:30 AM
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Some praise
I liked this post, it had good resonance.
Sliderrr.
posted by
Sliderrr
on August 9, 2005 at 5:50 PM
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Passionflower
yes, repetition is for singing. It doesn't always work for poetry though. The Waterboys could sing this one, right?
posted by
Vibrance
on August 9, 2005 at 5:43 PM
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I see lots of anguish and torment here...effective use of the repetitions
posted by
Passionflower
on August 9, 2005 at 4:26 PM
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When a person is depressed or heartbroken, the whole world looks bad to them.
Ben.
posted by
A-and-B
on August 9, 2005 at 2:47 PM
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I use the repetition because
it is meant to be a song.
posted by
Vibrance
on August 9, 2005 at 2:39 PM
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Vibrance,
this is a very good poem--I like the way you have used repetition of certain words, and also repeating lines.
posted by
Julia.
on August 9, 2005 at 2:37 PM
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Thank you for the kind words.
posted by
Vibrance
on August 9, 2005 at 2:36 PM
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This is beautiful!!!
posted by
Bel_
on August 9, 2005 at 2:29 PM
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Vib--really like the way this starts, first four lines
set the tone. Sweet baby down by the waterfront.
posted by
scriber
on August 9, 2005 at 2:28 PM
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