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Vibrance
nice poem

posted by
Rosetree
on September 7, 2006 at 8:39 AM
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Vibe
I,m not very sophisticated about songs or poetry really, and here I thought you were being a vrai Francophone avec le "pormanteau." lol
Thank God there are others here to educate me eh kiddo? I dfo love the words kiddo
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 14, 2005 at 4:59 PM
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Vib, just because of the_ebb_tide, I'm now going to be trying to make portmanteau expressions all the time now. I love stuff like that.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2005 at 2:48 PM
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oh it was totally a typo!! the H
But apparently it works! Just like a random act of nature. Love, vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 14, 2005 at 12:06 PM
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Scriber- My daddy is poetry
posted by
Vibrance
on August 14, 2005 at 10:53 AM
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Vibrance, boy can I associate with this. Great job. And, thanks to the_ebb_tide for his comment. I might have missed that without his comment just thinking it was a typo or something.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2005 at 9:01 AM
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I've got a lot to say about this one...
let me start with the "shrug" motif...
I am amused and impressed with the way you transform its intention and motivation at the end by adding the "h" to make one of the shortest, and yet perhaps the most vivid portmanteau expressions I have ever seen: SHRUGH! What a beauty! Nicely done. I must meander. But I will (to quote Arnie) BE BACK!!
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on August 14, 2005 at 8:39 AM
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Good resolve
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on August 13, 2005 at 8:21 PM
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Wonderful
A lot of emotion in this, I reall like it.
posted by
Bel_
on August 13, 2005 at 6:26 PM
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Vi--Who's yo daddy.
posted by
scriber
on August 13, 2005 at 5:55 PM
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Frank, I feel a creative wind coming back into my life. I feel crazed.
I feel like I did just before giving birth to my son. Wild. Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 13, 2005 at 11:19 AM
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Vibrance--strong words for a strong voice. hello doll.
posted by
scriber
on August 13, 2005 at 11:13 AM
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word-smit- calling a writer brave is probably
the best compliment. THANK YOU. much love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 13, 2005 at 10:39 AM
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ThomasFranklin
Thank you for the good wishes. I will starting up my third rewrite in September. Love, Vib
posted by
Vibrance
on August 13, 2005 at 10:00 AM
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Good luck with the film venture.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on August 13, 2005 at 9:35 AM
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Poignant.
Brave, Challenging...all at the same time.
posted by
word.smith
on August 13, 2005 at 9:31 AM
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Tx avant-garde.
posted by
Vibrance
on August 13, 2005 at 9:24 AM
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very heartfelt
good, expressive poem. i liked that.
posted by
avant-garde
on August 13, 2005 at 9:22 AM
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