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Yes, that was a nice poem!!!
~LB~ xo
posted by
Anony_Miss
on September 30, 2005 at 11:30 AM
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"the earth soaks up these tears of grief like a giant handkerchief" Wow. I think that's a wonderful image.
posted by
DuncanTaylor
on September 5, 2005 at 2:44 AM
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Nice poem :)
Thnak you for reading and leaving a comment, I'm just new to Blogit, subscribed a couple of days ago. I think I'll like it here, hehe. I liked your poem, it was really great for being written when you were only small. I was writing about animals and stupid things till I was about 15, heh. Anyway, see you round. :)
posted by
Ichi
on August 26, 2005 at 1:20 PM
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Good imagery at that age. Some of the kids I teach can't manage that at 14.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on August 25, 2005 at 7:10 AM
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clouds
I enjoyed this poen - short and sweet. Fiona
posted by
fionajean
on August 25, 2005 at 6:18 AM
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I'm hoping that I didn't peak too early!!!
posted by
MsVision
on August 24, 2005 at 7:17 PM
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You started out very early.
That poems good for an 8 y/o.
posted by
word.smith
on August 24, 2005 at 7:02 PM
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even at 8...
you were a mystic... I guess we've always known who we really are... beautiful poem
posted by
Arianna
on August 24, 2005 at 8:49 AM
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butterfly gal flying by
Lovely to read this poem and see you followed your bliss from the age of 8. I loved the line of the tears of grief being soaked up a giant handkerchief. It's amazing the profound nature a child displays in fiction and poetry. your post reminds me how important it is to write from the child within and not to discard the child writer for she knows how to write. Thanks for this wonderful gift.
posted by
butterflygal
on August 20, 2005 at 4:07 AM
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MsVision
Well yeahhh,
writing that at 8 makes you kind of special writer luv. looking foward to reading more of ya luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 19, 2005 at 4:17 PM
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Wow - what a great pom for an 8 year old.
posted by
littlemspickles
on August 19, 2005 at 3:43 PM
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Very nice. I think rhymes were a big deal at that age
posted by
Azur
on August 19, 2005 at 4:22 AM
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Pretty deep for an eight year-old!
Was it like, scribbled in crayon on construction paper or found in the back of a faded Mead wire-bound notebook?
posted by
CFarmer
on August 18, 2005 at 3:30 PM
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Isn't that great. .,
when you stumble upon something you wrote a long time ago. ., and after reading it. ., realize, "hey, that was pretty good!" *grin*
posted by
Joe_Love
on August 17, 2005 at 6:27 PM
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Hi, I was here
and enjoyed the poem--a great poem for an eight year-old. I'll look for Celebrities in Fire. Hemlocker
posted by
Hemlocker
on August 17, 2005 at 5:25 PM
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What a lovely poem you wrote... at 8 years old!
posted by
SilverMoon7
on August 17, 2005 at 1:33 PM
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That poem was written 31 years ago. Nice poem especially for a kid.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on August 16, 2005 at 11:13 PM
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