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Hi Mia!!
That's great!! It reminds me of deep depression and the "dreamscape" that often accompanies it..Great work!! Schree` :-) It's something that everybody can understand..
posted by
Schree
on September 7, 2005 at 12:22 PM
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Mia...I am a witness to the "existing" light at the end of the tunnel...
I died Miaella...figuratively...and by the grace of God...a God I didn't have faith in before...I am alive...and made a believer. Many hugs your way~
posted by
cosy
on September 6, 2005 at 12:01 PM
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Mia,
this is an excellent poem. I do hope that, by the content, that you are now feeling better. Life has many cycles and persevearence is a courageous step.
red
posted by
redlunar
on September 6, 2005 at 9:08 AM
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Mia, when you write there is an unmistakable illustration of a particular emotion, which I believe engages other, perhaps sublime feelings in the reader...Excellent, Dear Lady!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 6, 2005 at 1:07 AM
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so deep and sad...but done with such talent.....I hope you are ok?
Take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 5, 2005 at 8:29 AM
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Mia,
It is sad...but written so well !!!
posted by
SincerityAnna
on September 4, 2005 at 7:29 PM
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sad, but pretty.
witchy
posted by
witchywoman
on September 4, 2005 at 2:41 PM
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True and deep. One for the book!!! Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 4, 2005 at 6:50 AM
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It's a sad one, this one.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on September 3, 2005 at 5:01 PM
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MiaElla
I loved it!
You are such a thoughtful person!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on September 3, 2005 at 3:34 PM
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