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thats was prose par excellence.. you have a way with words....
posted by
prisondairy
on September 14, 2005 at 9:55 PM
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candelas
Very pretty....a poem really? I like it but it's a little out of my reach. Look forward to reading more. Dee
posted by
Who_ja_expect
on September 14, 2005 at 6:22 PM
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Interesting story
posted by
Aria4
on September 14, 2005 at 4:00 PM
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Ariel, I think you are the best writer on Blogit...I don't read fiction,
but you're ability to choose magical words that flow freely and delicately making the prose come alive with such vivid imagery and wonder are incredible. I am completely at awe. I do hope you're published...you have amazing talent. Man, oh man.
Ariala has to lay down now.LOL
posted by
Ariala
on September 14, 2005 at 1:22 PM
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Flame
Thak you for dropping in, and your lovely comment.It is nice to be appreciated!
posted by
ariel70
on September 14, 2005 at 1:13 PM
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What a great piece Ariel. I just don't know what else to say other than just fantastic and original.
posted by
Flame-thrower
on September 14, 2005 at 1:06 PM
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Silver
Thank you very much. Ariel blushes
posted by
ariel70
on September 14, 2005 at 12:38 PM
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Breathtakingly gorgeous storytelling!
posted by
SilverMoon7
on September 14, 2005 at 12:34 PM
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Excellent story, Ariel. Well done!!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on September 14, 2005 at 12:21 PM
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