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Once again, I will like to deeply thank you and also point out that , I really liked the attention you are paying to each word written and also your sense of humour. About the P word that I used, I will like to apologise, while also pointing out that, it was just a joke and nothing else. Hopefully, you will read me again tomorrow. God Bless and thank you again.
posted by
Flame-thrower
on October 14, 2005 at 8:54 AM
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hey i just wanted to let u know that i added you to my people's list and thanks for the comment
posted by
lilaznthug85
on October 14, 2005 at 8:39 AM
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I enjoy writing when I can chat to people between posts.
posted by
MsVision
on October 14, 2005 at 5:51 AM
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Well, I don't often (pretty much never) read the fiction section, but your writing is very easy to read. You must enjoy writing.
posted by
Ca88andra
on October 14, 2005 at 5:43 AM
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You never know,
Maybe she'll find that Paulo has other finer qualities?
posted by
fionajean
on October 14, 2005 at 4:52 AM
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MsVision...
I didn't know all this was going on in your posts, I am so glad to have found this.. I will be back to catch up!
posted by
BrightIrish
on October 13, 2005 at 6:49 PM
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It is a pleasure to discover that the post or article you have read of helpful. I have always thought that, this space of us is meant to be muatuality educative and not a place for pleasantries. I hope that you will read the next edition tomorrow. I ca assure you that you will like it.Meanwhile thank you very much for reading me. God Bless.
posted by
Flame-thrower
on October 13, 2005 at 8:47 AM
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MsVision, leeches are such loathsome things that make me shiver but little loathsome things now and then woven into the beauty make life interesting.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 13, 2005 at 8:14 AM
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posted by
Dee2206
on October 11, 2005 at 2:24 AM
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Hopefully you will weave
Paulo into future chapters. You were effective in making him antagonistic with his introduction. It would be a shame not to build upon that in the future.
posted by
Joe_Love
on October 10, 2005 at 6:14 PM
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MsVision...I am picturing the "tall well-built stranger." teehee...
This post again continues very smoothly with easy and believable conversation and good development of characters. This Paulo guy sounds dreamy..
posted by
MedusaNextDoor
on October 10, 2005 at 1:27 PM
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Those stripy thermals sound enticing...!
posted by
SilverMoon7
on October 9, 2005 at 6:06 PM
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Indeed things don't always quite work out the way you hope-
BUT whatever happens happens for the best
posted by
Straightforward
on October 9, 2005 at 7:31 AM
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A great story! I will continue to follow to see what will happen.
posted by
Aria4
on October 8, 2005 at 7:14 PM
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Good stuff
The hearty meal sounds cozy. Can't wait to read what's next. SRG
posted by
sarahrg
on October 7, 2005 at 3:55 PM
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A group of people will experience friction in their quest. Interesting.
Congratulations for your win in the Puzzle! Your member profile & comment is plugged in the latest post of the same blog. I've clicked here 3 times. Thanks for participating.
B.
posted by
A-and-B
on October 7, 2005 at 2:28 PM
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~LB~ xo
posted by
Anony_Miss
on October 7, 2005 at 2:09 PM
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I'm waiting to see what happens from here.
posted by
word.smith
on October 7, 2005 at 10:45 AM
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Vision--
Oooh, leeches...no friggin' way--how icky!! I smell a romance between Paolo and Miranda...but I could be wrong...great fiction!
posted by
Julia.
on October 7, 2005 at 9:23 AM
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Oh I love it
Always leave them wondering...
posted by
Bel_
on October 7, 2005 at 9:11 AM
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Vision nice post
I need to go back and catch up. very well written
posted by
TissiBlake
on October 7, 2005 at 7:17 AM
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McVision--nice outing, and well told.
posted by
scriber
on October 7, 2005 at 7:06 AM
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Australia, a place I've wanted to go all my life......
posted by
MaggieMae
on October 7, 2005 at 5:48 AM
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MsVision, I see you've been at it a while.......
I have to go back and try to catch up, and I will.
Have a good day!
posted by
MaggieMae
on October 7, 2005 at 5:46 AM
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