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Awesome write!

You sound so sad and lonely in this relationship. Great imagery and sentiment expressed in a compact package. Excellent effort.

posted by rafika on January 20, 2006 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

love it

TodayI' m going to hear your words in the background - "Because I hear Mozart in the background..." Beautiful

posted by marzieh on January 12, 2006 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

mia

more please...boy can i identify with this poem.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on December 17, 2005 at 12:45 PM | link to this | reply

this was posted on my birthday

i just noticed it. Reminds me of a poem from an old friend of mine, Sharon Mesmer. "Love is a Many Splendored Thing, In Brooklyn." The contrasting visions between the two lovers. The book is Half Angel, Half Lunch and is really terrific.

posted by tbgroucho on December 5, 2005 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

mia, wow! You are one great read, Lady!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on December 3, 2005 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

mia

god you're good.

posted by MysticGmekeepr on November 16, 2005 at 11:46 AM | link to this | reply

Mia,

ah, a beautiful yet sad poem...one of your best -- I really enjoyed reading it...bravo,

red

posted by redlunar on November 1, 2005 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent work

posted by _Symphony_ on October 31, 2005 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Very very nice!

I'd absolutely love to hear you speak Hamlet into my ear! Mmmmmmmm

posted by SomeoneElse on October 28, 2005 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

I love the romance here, MiaElla. Those few words are so delightful. And

then, I really feel the contrast of the two people; it's strong and so touching to love someone over such differences. There is both a beauty to it, and a despair.... (I get a little dispersed on the word "another" at the end; I'm not sure if there's something I'm not getting since I just woke up two minutes ago or if a different word would have conveyed what you mean more strongly; I'm kind of stuck wanting a bit of an explanation on that.... But other than that one trailing question, for me this poem is absolutely gorgeous.)

posted by Adaman on October 25, 2005 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

I noticed!

posted by brisbane_artist on October 24, 2005 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

BrightIrish

Yeah...it's acrylic on canvas...lol...I think you are the only one to ever notice it!