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wow
i couldn't read it all at this time, but i look forward to coming back, catching up, and reading on.
mar
posted by
mar_
on January 25, 2006 at 5:27 PM
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INTRIGUING
Intriguing characters, tantalizing setting, a somewhat calm foreboding tone: and so the heated the journey begins.
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
on December 21, 2005 at 6:51 PM
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MsVision,
| I'm getting caught up. Will be back! Good going so far.  |
posted by
word.smith
on November 5, 2005 at 5:56 AM
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This is fun reading your "book." You write very well, real sounding dialog---not an easy thing to do. I admire a good story teller. Again, not an easy thing to be.
posted by
Tiel
on November 3, 2005 at 1:53 PM
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I Liked it!
Very good , look forward to reading the rest. Steve.
posted by
slam
on November 3, 2005 at 9:19 AM
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Nice to read you again.
posted by
_Symphony_
on October 31, 2005 at 6:02 AM
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awesome
posted by
lilaznthug85
on October 31, 2005 at 5:22 AM
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MsVision
I'm a bit unclear on something. Why has she come to Eva's??
posted by
Joe_Love
on October 30, 2005 at 6:09 PM
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MsVision
I liked the closing paragraph. Keep it going.
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on October 29, 2005 at 4:13 PM
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very good...I enjoyed reading
posted by
Samantha39
on October 29, 2005 at 7:15 AM
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Am running out of time - Have printed will comment on Monday
posted by
fionajean
on October 28, 2005 at 7:25 AM
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very interesting to read, keep writing
posted by
lilaznthug85
on October 26, 2005 at 6:58 AM
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