Go to no mercy
- Add a comment
- Go to silence
Dog, well, then I should be super healthy by now.
This wound won't heal. And it keeps showing up in new places. I appreciate the depth of comment.
posted by
Temple
on November 21, 2005 at 9:16 PM
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Temp
heal 1 to make sound, well, or healthy again; restore to health /heal the sick/ 2a) to cure or get rid of (a disease)... 3 free from grief, troubles, evil etc.
It is pain that heals wounds
A deep poem for deep wounds
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on November 21, 2005 at 9:08 PM
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Jimmy, yes, very true.
You'd think I'd be used to it by now.
posted by
Temple
on November 21, 2005 at 1:38 AM
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Good work...
rough feeling...peace...
posted by
jimmy68
on November 21, 2005 at 1:31 AM
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Thanks Joe... :)
posted by
Temple
on November 20, 2005 at 11:02 AM
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Libby, you're so cute.
I don't know if I've ever thought about rainbows....but Petie looks like a big floppy bunny when he runs around corners...and you know I love boy toys.
Thanks, love.
posted by
Temple
on November 20, 2005 at 11:01 AM
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well done
posted by
lilaznthug85
on November 20, 2005 at 8:49 AM
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Think about bunnies and rainbows and boy toys today.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on November 20, 2005 at 7:43 AM
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fionajean
Some things are unfortunately universal, and being shut out or not talked to is one of them I think we all understand.
posted by
Temple
on November 20, 2005 at 6:44 AM
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This seems to speak
to an emotion we've all felt - we're not being listened to.
posted by
fionajean
on November 20, 2005 at 6:28 AM
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Dead Man, I gotta tell ya, I get happy when people read a lot at once.
Yes, sometimes putting the emotion here is best for safe keeping. Writing is my salvation. Thank you.
posted by
Temple
on November 20, 2005 at 3:13 AM
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Temple
I hear much emotion in your work. I like that in a poem.
posted by
bwFrampton
on November 20, 2005 at 2:56 AM
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