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great stuff
I'm off to the next one 
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
on December 28, 2005 at 9:19 PM
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Merry Christmas!
posted by
Ca88andra
on December 23, 2005 at 10:14 PM
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Update coming soon
Sorry about the delay in posting I've been off on a little road trip across the country to a wedding in a little reserve named after the bride's grandfather and am a wee bit exhausted, spent all day yesterday on the road I will post in the next couple of days
posted by
MsVision
on December 5, 2005 at 2:54 AM
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MsVision
Too bad this is fiction. I'd like to shop in that store! Hurry back!
posted by
Tiel
on December 4, 2005 at 1:50 PM
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hey, where is the update?
posted by
Meringue
on November 30, 2005 at 10:44 PM
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pretty cool, so whats up?
posted by
lilaznthug85
on November 27, 2005 at 7:05 AM
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Ms Vision, must come back and read more....this is good writing!
posted by
Meringue
on November 25, 2005 at 7:10 AM
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That's very true, and thanks for the feedback - greatly appreciated. I've been a little precipitous recently. Good discipline is such an important skill,
posted by
MsVision
on November 25, 2005 at 4:30 AM
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MsVision
Good writing. It might help if you broke up your large paragraphs, making them easier to digest. It took me awhile to figure that one out. Best of luck to you.
posted by
avant-garde
on November 25, 2005 at 4:15 AM
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