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Hope things go well.
Jo
posted by
brisbane_artist
on December 2, 2005 at 1:43 PM
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Coolacen
Just passing thro' for a little while this evening.
Forgive me, but I'm unaware that I asked your for help. What did you mean exactly?
I liked the sentiments expressed in your poem, but I must say that I found it a little visually untidy, those bottom lines too long. Of course, this is a highly subjective opinion, expressing my own personal taste, so plese do ignore it, if it clashes with yours. or accept it in the spirit in which it is offered ; frienships and support.
I shall read you, and comment again, should you wish. I may not be here to read comments on the comments page this evening.
posted by
ariel70
on December 2, 2005 at 10:23 AM
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See Blogmaster on WW3
See Blogmaster on WW3.
posted by
cerberus
on December 2, 2005 at 9:59 AM
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