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rafika
In this place I can be vulnerable...in my words. In life? Not so much. I'm so happy you liked it. I enjoy your work immensely. (I haven't commented much, I'm bad about that)
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:32 AM
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So intense
Your writing is so fiercely honest, so painfully sensitive, so open and vulnerable. It is difficult to read without empathizing with the writer. Exquisite poem. Thank you for sharing.
posted by
rafika
on December 26, 2005 at 4:28 PM
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MysticGmekeepr
Well, I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying yourself. That's a nice thing to know. Thank you for the read and the kind words.
posted by
Temple
on December 17, 2005 at 10:06 PM
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Hi Temple
...enjoying myself here on yoru blog reading yoru lovely poems
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on December 17, 2005 at 11:05 AM
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straightforward
Very true. Sometimes they force our hand. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:47 PM
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red
My poetry is the only place in my life I can speak with few words! Thank you for such a thoughtful comment. It means a lot coming from you, you are very talented yourself.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:46 PM
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Spitfire
I'm sure you are interpreting some along with recent events, but it's a combination of things really. Thank you for reading and on the compliment.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:44 PM
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Ariala
Thanks so much.
I think you may have mentioned the painting, but you can mention it again. The artist's name is below and you can click it and go to her link. She has other's like it, but the site is outdated. I think she was only 16 or 17 when she did that one. I love it, too.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:42 PM
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Cuddly One
Thank you, wordmaster.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:39 PM
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Strat
When you said I have power I wanted to find a cape and stand on a table or something.
But, seriously, thank you very much. Harnessing emotions to put to paper is a healthy thing for me. I'm glad you like it. :)
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:38 PM
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Dead Guy
Nice comment! I like that.
Thank you. Wow, I didn't even think I had a poetic flock, that's pretty cool. I'm proud to have you as a member, as you know I am certainly a member of yours, indeed.
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:36 PM
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Holy Grail
Thank you.
xo
posted by
Temple
on December 15, 2005 at 6:35 PM
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Indeed, if they put the blade, we can make our decisions the cutting edge
posted by
Straightforward
on December 15, 2005 at 6:31 PM
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Temple,
As always your words carry power -- you imbue them with so much emotion and thought, yet you write with so few words which punctuates your message. Excellent poem. I so enjoy reading your work.
red
posted by
redlunar
on December 15, 2005 at 8:40 AM
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T,
I hope you're doing okay. Great work here, I just hope it's correct as how I'm interpreting it.
Luv U!
posted by
SpitFire70
on December 14, 2005 at 11:27 PM
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Powerful imagery and emotions...I also love that photo on the right. I've
mentioned that before...but thought I'd mention it again!
posted by
Ariala
on December 14, 2005 at 6:14 AM
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Good Temple, well done, Lady...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 13, 2005 at 10:42 PM
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You have real power. Very, very hard hitting stuff.
I like it.
posted by
strat
on December 13, 2005 at 12:24 PM
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Temple
This is so very good. True poetic flow with sharpness - like light shining from the blades that you speak of.
Another great one...I am in your poetic flock!
posted by
bwFrampton
on December 12, 2005 at 7:06 PM
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Temple
posted by
Holy_Grail
on December 12, 2005 at 4:14 PM
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