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SoularEclipse, I'm so glad you like it so much.
I wrote it for two of my best friends, married and best friends themselves for 14 years.  I'm not sure what you mean by the iron vest...but it's okay if you comment, or not, whatever you feel.  You are welcome. :)

posted by Temple on December 25, 2005 at 3:41 AM | link to this | reply

Temple, I have read this several times. It is beautiful. Thank you. I come back every day or two and read it again. I'm not sure what it is that keeps me from commenting more freely. Perhaps it is the iron vest. Thank you for your gifts.

posted by syzygy on December 24, 2005 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

Aberjhani
Why thank you!  What a lovely comment.   They are an inspiring couple...together and still in love and goofy after 14 years.  It helps to have good material. :)

posted by Temple on December 21, 2005 at 2:33 AM | link to this | reply

Rapturous Indeed

Loved the exquisite blend of sensuality and spirituality in this beautiful poem.

Aberjhani

posted by Aberjhani on December 20, 2005 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Doggie....temp.tress? I love that!
Yes, I was inspired here...these two have been through a lot, but the love between them is tangible.  And the love for their children and their family, including me.  This poem was particularly inspired by a photo Molly took (on a timer) of the two of them.  I can't show it here, but it's unbelievably touching and romantic.  You found a lesson?  Wow!  I wasn't even trying.

posted by Temple on December 16, 2005 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

Temp.tress
A beautiful deep and clear expression. And, again, a wonderful lesson.

-smartdog

posted by smartdog_670 on December 15, 2005 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply