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Temple,
THAT is awesome poetry there g/f !!!!!!! EXCELLENT !!!!!!!
posted by
Jaxson-Pete
on January 17, 2006 at 4:36 AM
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Isis
Exactly. He's starting to have the feeling that someone is out there. I'm excited, because it's time. :) I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 10:38 PM
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Temple,
You did a beautiful job on this.
He knows, even if he doesn't know.
Really lovely
posted by
myrrhage_
on January 8, 2006 at 10:29 PM
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B, I'm glad you liked it..
I think it will end well. If only we knew when! :)
posted by
Temple
on January 7, 2006 at 5:29 AM
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Beautiful poem. I hope it ends well for the poet.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on January 7, 2006 at 4:07 AM
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DeadGuy
Wow, what a powerful comment! Thank you so much.
posted by
Temple
on December 31, 2005 at 5:39 AM
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Temple
Very fine - and oh, so true to many a man.
The questions that burn men's souls when a hint of change rips through their lives. A different kiss from the woman he had loved for years. When loving glances perish, replaced by indifferent eyes. Wanting voice succumbs to routine conversation and touch, itself, is like meeting a stranger in the dark.
So much power in your words, Temple! Very good.
posted by
bwFrampton
on December 30, 2005 at 6:33 AM
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Reni
I hope that's a good thing! lol...
Not like, "hmmm, how can I find a way to tell her this sucks?"
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 11:56 PM
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No comment, as I can't think of one worthy of this piece...
posted by
Renigade
on December 29, 2005 at 9:06 PM
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Straightforward
For now, darling. Only for now. In mere months he shall worship at the temple.
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:30 AM
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MsVision
I haven't actually read Wuthering Heights, which is shameful considering I have an English minor. I know it's reputation, so a hardy "thank you!" is in order. And I appreciate the read.
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:28 AM
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Teddy
What a delicious comment! Overcool....thank you! Hauntingly even, I love it...
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:27 AM
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Cass
Thank you....
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:26 AM
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Smartdog
Maturity....hmmmm, that means when I wasn't looking I grew up a little bit.
Shocker! Elegance is one of my favorite words. Thank you. Hope you are well.
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:26 AM
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Frankenkitty
I believe we have more than one kind, and one kind of, soulmate. I think I've had soulmates that I've known from other lives, people that I've known for eternities, people that were here to bring me lessons. They all serve some higher purpose in my life....some for a day, some forever. I think people sometimes get lucky and marry a soulmate, but sometimes we have one great love of our lives and they teach us something grand, something special. The love of my life taught me
how to love. He was truly a soulmate. But not the One. The one is the man I will finally be able to be best friends with forever, let my walls down with, love all the days of the rest of my life. I've not found him yet. Is he
the soulmate? I don't know. I know Spitfire and I are soulmates. We fight because we're too much alike, but we love each other like sisters and can't leave each other for anything. I think when I finally marry, the time and circumstance will set me up with a soulmate. I can't leave Spiffy, I'd be lost. I'll be lost without my future husband, too. But, I believe in many previous lives, many lessons to learn, and my soul has recognized many others. It's different for all of us, I think. But I do believe our soul's do have much to say in the matter.
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:24 AM
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DrJPT
Thank you. Deep feelings are the best ones. :)
posted by
Temple
on December 29, 2005 at 3:15 AM
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The temple of love lies elsewhere, eh?
posted by
Straightforward
on December 28, 2005 at 4:49 AM
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A little reminiscent of Wuthering Heights
posted by
MsVision
on December 28, 2005 at 4:22 AM
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Hauntingly overcool, Lady...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 27, 2005 at 5:13 PM
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Beautiful...
posted by
Ca88andra
on December 26, 2005 at 6:51 PM
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Temp.tress
This piece showed maturity and elegance. Nicely done.
Be fine
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on December 26, 2005 at 4:30 PM
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This is a topic for me that
I've always had mixed feelings on until recently. When my mom and dad seperated, I kept telling my mom that maybe life was about many different special relationships and not just one soul mate. She insisted that there were soul mates, and she was lost without my dad. Now they are getting back together, and I think maybe she's right. Even when she angry at my dad(with good reason), she still believed in soul mates. I thought I had met my soul mate once, and thought that we weren't going to be together in this life. Now, maybe I was wrong, but it was a strong and instant connection, a connection without doubt. Then, I met Emil, and I wondered maybe he was meant for me in this lifetime, but was he my soul mate? Now, I know I love him, and I feel like he was meant for me, but is he my soul mate, and does it really matter? Confusing. Either way, I am lucky and I hope you find everything you're looking for in 2006.
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on December 26, 2005 at 10:05 AM
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Nice Poem with deep feelings...
posted by
Dr_JPT
on December 26, 2005 at 9:14 AM
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HG, I feel like he's out there, wondering where I am.
I'm like, "yooohoo.." lol... I hope I find him, too. Then it's your turn.
posted by
Temple
on December 26, 2005 at 7:29 AM
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rafika
Welcome! Thank you for the read and such a thoughtful comment and critique. I'm glad you liked the piece.
posted by
Temple
on December 26, 2005 at 7:28 AM
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I hope he finds you.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on December 26, 2005 at 7:11 AM
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Poem: The One
This is an elegant poem, tastefully crafted. I enjoyed the segues between lines and the vivid imagery in the verse. I could feel the sensitivity of the author throughout the poem. Lovely effort full of wistfulness and hope.
posted by
rafika
on December 26, 2005 at 7:06 AM
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