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Rifika--thanks, very kind.
posted by
scriber
on January 10, 2006 at 4:58 PM
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Yeah, I liked that "squirrelly" description the best
Intriguing, engaging, witty and insightful. Great.
posted by
rafika
on January 9, 2006 at 1:32 PM
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iSiSeYeSs --thanks doll, nice to see you reading and writing.
posted by
scriber
on January 9, 2006 at 12:07 PM
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ThomasFranklin --sex without thinking is the best...lol.
posted by
scriber
on January 9, 2006 at 12:06 PM
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Scriber,
Sure, she was madly in love. But what comes around goes around. In the end we all have to tend to our personalities.
Wonderful poem!
posted by
myrrhage_
on January 9, 2006 at 6:21 AM
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Good work. Its a rollercoaster.The sex part doesn't make your brain think. By the end though, the words are hitting you and forcing you to think. Cold slap of reality. She likes for the personality making the sex average...nothing great. What a let down from a strong beginning.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on January 8, 2006 at 8:54 PM
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FactorFiction --thanks much.
posted by
scriber
on January 6, 2006 at 6:06 AM
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A-and-B --affected about equally it would seem. ha.
posted by
scriber
on January 6, 2006 at 6:04 AM
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You had me at "squirrelly"
What a poem!
posted by
FactorFiction
on January 6, 2006 at 5:43 AM
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Scriber,
The Ice Man did well. Was the hot chick affected by the onslaught of the cold? Lol.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on January 6, 2006 at 5:39 AM
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