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It sounds
as though all is going to be just fine and I congratulate you. What was the sandwich filling?

posted by malcolm on January 7, 2006 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply

Feedback is good sometimes
especially from the clean distance of a sympathetic editor. We must get too close to our stuff or it doesn't mean anything. Long time ago a friend talked to me about writing - his advice was to "murder your darlings." What he meant was to take that really beautiful turn of phrase that sounds so good to you, but which is taking away from the flow, and get rid of it. Anyone who thinks the process is easy hasn't actually done it. Congrats, May-B.  :)pat

posted by Pat_B on January 7, 2006 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

It is nice to have somebody to bounce
your work and thoughts off.  It's so easy to get wrapped up looking at things the way that YOU look at things that it is easy to forget that YOU won't be the person reading it.

Interesting topic, May.

posted by Joe_Love on January 7, 2006 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Yeah, it's winking. Dr JPT..

I remember having to battle with my instructors over papers. If I did as they told me, it was an endless succession of fine tunings, sometimes to their own suggestions, the result was never better than a "C", and they would comment about originality. If I didn't do as they said but tried to get the general gist of what they tought needed helping, I would get a "D", but a comment about how original or good my ideas were.

Maybe that's why I hate being "proctored".

Thanks for fixing my neuroses! Where do Ileave the check?

(Of course, 10% to MayB...)

posted by majroj on January 7, 2006 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

You Are Fortunate
When my dissertation was edited, I know what it is like to receive suggestions or corrections.  I learned quickly to just do it.  When finished, what a relief!!  Best to you!!

posted by Dr_JPT on January 6, 2006 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

food4thought, typos are the least of my worries
when he gets his HB editing pencil out

posted by Azur on January 6, 2006 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Majroj
or desperate to file a good story to deadline

That guy is supposed to wink

posted by Azur on January 6, 2006 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

One has to be detached enough to accept and use the feedback.

posted by majroj on January 6, 2006 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

My wife is very blunt...
When it comes to a critique of my work and she can spot spelling errors from 100 yards.  Thank you for the photo comment, I did post.

posted by food4thought on January 6, 2006 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

Enjoyed your story...in depth look at what it takes to crank out
A decent piece of work...I always try to get input from the (few) intelligent people around...it's a gift that not many seem to have....that editing thing.

posted by Passionflower on January 6, 2006 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

MerryAnne, I usually don't want to inflict work in progress on others BUT
I do so on blogs all the time

posted by Azur on January 6, 2006 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

blagging
Even when I know something is probably OK I am still nervous particularly if it is the first time

posted by Azur on January 6, 2006 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

JohnMcNab, thanks again for the encouragement. It really helps
It was relief, then delirium

posted by Azur on January 6, 2006 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

MayB
I can imagine your delirium - and hunger - when the editor said 'The piece works well.'   Many, many congrats.  You are now in with the 'in' crowd, MayB.

posted by johnmacnab on January 6, 2006 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

I also get shy showing others my work before it is printed

and even afterwards I make excuses and say that it's not my best work, even though I think it is.

I even do this with my boyfriend.

posted by blagging on January 6, 2006 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

I have a good friend who is a great writer
but I am still a little shy sending my stuff to them.  I know I need to get over it, but it is hard.

posted by MerryAnne on January 6, 2006 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply