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posted by
_Symphony_
on March 27, 2006 at 5:27 AM
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Wow. looking at the poem, one might jes think I am prophetic.
posted by
scriber
on March 25, 2006 at 7:35 AM
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A-and-B--we are all haunted with our misdeeds and memories of.
posted by
scriber
on March 25, 2006 at 7:18 AM
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redlunar--right, can't fool the lunar. The poem, as presented does have a
few flaws. lol.
posted by
scriber
on March 25, 2006 at 7:17 AM
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Okay, this poem is good, but I've seen better of your work scriber. I get the message, however I think the content is too elusive to get the point across. I do like the last two lines, they flow nicely. And, who is that woman with the moon? ...red 
posted by
redlunar
on March 25, 2006 at 6:57 AM
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A haunted room sounds spooky. A haunted mind can't be dispossessed easily.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on March 24, 2006 at 2:10 PM
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mark2556--That's why u have the high fence at the compound. As for
correct usage, I try to watch that in other people.
posted by
scriber
on March 24, 2006 at 9:05 AM
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by the way, Poe was a youthful favorite of mine; and his Annabel Lee
is a favorite.
posted by
scriber
on March 24, 2006 at 9:03 AM
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M.P.O. --thanks. I don't try to be one way or the other, usually.
but I am aware of your preferences and thanks.
posted by
scriber
on March 24, 2006 at 9:02 AM
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I like this one a lot; it's eerie and romantic ...
without being so "graphic". Not to harp on that aspect (I'm not, like, a Puritan or anything), because obviously you're very good at both types, but I'm merely stating my personal preference.
At any rate, I was reminded somewhat of one of my favorite poems, "Annabel Lee".
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.
posted by
Mademoiselle
on March 24, 2006 at 8:47 AM
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Keep reality at bay?
Now THAT's a topic I can help with. And yes, that's ending a sentence with a preposition. Dammit.
posted by
mark2556
on March 24, 2006 at 8:44 AM
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