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SYMPHONY --thanks. are u gettting back together?
posted by
scriber
on March 29, 2006 at 8:28 AM
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well done.
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 29, 2006 at 3:15 AM
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Krisles --thanks much. There is a "thing" going around that discusses
whorls of the hair and homosexually bent. lol.
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2006 at 8:27 PM
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anthony1wiley --glad u are giving my poetry a go. I think generally speakin
there is not so much june and spoon, but more adultrated
images of real life. as i have said, i don't have a real gift for accents or dialects, as did some of the better or more classical writers. I use a sort of urban dialect, lol; one that parts bits and pieces might be heard in Detroit. I like to be called, the urban poet.
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2006 at 8:24 PM
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Loved it! I could picture them all so clearly......great job! A really fun read.....
posted by
Krisles
on March 28, 2006 at 6:01 PM
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Scriber
I'm not much of a poet reader but I'm tryin'.
So let me ask you something. Would this be like a dialect spoken in Louisiana or like that?
I did study it, and am taken in by imagining the people to go with the words.
Have no idea why I haven't taken to reading you previously, mostly I think because I don't understand all writing, so I pass.
Well, I have more time now so I'm giving it a go.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 28, 2006 at 5:54 PM
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A-and-B--yes, that is a point.
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2006 at 3:16 PM
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Aberjhani --thanks. not sure why the font was smaller than usual.
posted by
scriber
on March 28, 2006 at 3:15 PM
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When there is a severe shortage of dance partners, homogeneous is the way.
posted by
A-and-B
on March 28, 2006 at 2:37 PM
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A very witty
and comical write. But the font was extremely small and hard to read.
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
on March 28, 2006 at 2:37 PM
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