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Hi, shypettite,
I found this one through Uncle Dave's blog. I'm glad I did. Good imagery. Familiar feelings. I've seen or heard of the lonely hangers in the closet before. I don't remember where. This is well done. Thanks. :)
posted by
BlackPearl1
on April 20, 2006 at 5:06 PM
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Showcase Arrival here
Glad I clicked. Poignant, solid flow and imagery Shypetite. Good poem.
posted by
Katray2
on April 19, 2006 at 6:47 AM
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Shypettite, just revisiting the showcasers to see how it's going. Looks
like it's working for you. I'm pleased.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on April 19, 2006 at 2:47 AM
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This is an enjoyable read
although the poem is conveying a sad and lonely mood.
posted by
una01
on April 17, 2006 at 6:41 PM
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Very good, shypettite
I also liked the "naked hangers" huddling. It grabbed me because it is so true and yet I've never seen anything written about them before.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 14, 2006 at 7:54 AM
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I love your analogy about the naked hangers cuddled together. Very vivid image!
posted by
Tanree
on April 12, 2006 at 4:22 PM
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Good prose moves the reader without need for explanation ....
...no need to explain here ... very nice
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 12, 2006 at 3:47 PM
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Very visual and visceral...just heart-wrenchingly effective!
posted by
brettnik
on April 11, 2006 at 5:46 PM
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shypettite: catching my breath
a vivid, and moving account of a broken and lonly heart. You remind all of us what it means to "have and to hold..."
thank you
posted by
Captain_Gulliver
on April 11, 2006 at 12:11 PM
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Beautiful poem that shows us the pain. The naked hangers cuddling together works very well for me. The empty pit is strong too.
Great choice for the showcase.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on April 11, 2006 at 1:06 AM
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Well said!
posted by
Jomei
on April 5, 2006 at 8:00 PM
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Jomei, It is honey for my heart.
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 7:55 PM
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Thanks, Lensman.
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 7:54 PM
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Shy, deeply moving words indeed. Well executed.
posted by
Jomei
on April 5, 2006 at 7:49 PM
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Shypettite
Another marvelous poem. Once again there are elements in it that I can personally recognize.
posted by
Lensman
on April 5, 2006 at 7:45 PM
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Hi there
What a lovely poem. It is so beautiful and moving. Thanks for your last comment on my blog. V.
posted by
Vangelina
on April 4, 2006 at 7:42 AM
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Shypettite,
I like the part about the bed holding you. You express so much feeling in one or two well-chosen images and phrases. You'll do well with the language, because you have a feeling for it. You are truly a talented poet.
posted by
Blanche.
on March 31, 2006 at 1:26 PM
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I just step by to blogit during my work hours.
I have no time to read more and to write back, but tahnk you so much for your nice comments. You made my day nicer, much nicer- . Will be back to read more of your pages late night. - Love you.
posted by
shypettite
on March 31, 2006 at 9:50 AM
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u put so much feeling into the poem
as it may seem
posted by
lilaznthug85
on March 31, 2006 at 8:55 AM
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You touch my soul
Your poetry reminds me of a dear one lost and all the feelings I had when that happened. Just remember alway through the darkest and hardest moments in life we learn how to truly appreciate the good things.
posted by
Koukla
on March 31, 2006 at 8:12 AM
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you are
you are the beautiful love that you felt with another. You are whole and complete. You "are"!
posted by
mr-nobody1
on March 31, 2006 at 6:49 AM
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Very touching, beautiful and sad
Wishes for healing and peace.
posted by
Katray2
on March 31, 2006 at 6:34 AM
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shypettite
wow... what a mood here...
posted by
Nanaroo
on March 31, 2006 at 6:27 AM
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Yes, Shypettite...I, too, like the 'naked hangers cuddling together.'
Very nicely expressed and we can all relate to this one...Good job!
posted by
MedusaNextDoor
on March 29, 2006 at 8:34 AM
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Thank you, all of you, who read my poem and left me such a nice comment.
I am really surprise, that I am able to express my thoughts in English, the way people like and undestand, as well.
posted by
shypettite
on March 29, 2006 at 8:30 AM
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Hi, shypettite,
I agree with OFFBEATS that lots of us can relate to that feeling at one time or another. This is a really thoughtful poem. I really like the part about the naked hangers cuddling together. Thanks. :)
posted by
BlackPearl1
on March 29, 2006 at 5:18 AM
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Beautiful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 29, 2006 at 4:22 AM
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..you write so well! ..such economey of word!
posted by
MasonGarrett
on March 29, 2006 at 1:29 AM
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Thank you, Offbeats, for stepping by and your support.
posted by
shypettite
on March 28, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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Shy, my heart hurts after reading this, I remember the feeling well!
It is a lovely work, really!
angel
posted by
anglofinspirtion
on March 28, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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Shy
This is sad and lovely...I have to wonder how many of us on this site are women who can relate?I enjoy being single, but like tonight ( for a couple of hours) I thought about being alone too much...
posted by
Offy
on March 28, 2006 at 8:07 PM
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wow... very moving.
posted by
-blackcat
on March 28, 2006 at 7:29 PM
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