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FARSAILOR,
I enjoyed reading your poem and the melancholy thoughts that seemed to be here. Thanks for sharing them. I think this poem is well written. :)
posted by
BlackPearl1
on April 7, 2006 at 4:51 PM
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hiiii..
thank you for dropping by & leaving such a wonderful comment....& i must say this poem is very poignant..& yet gives hope...soilders are the metaphors of human life....& you portrayed the thought very well..
posted by
abhilasha
on April 7, 2006 at 8:24 AM
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Absolutely good work...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 7, 2006 at 8:13 AM
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this reminds me of a good portion of my friends who have joined the army, a couple were in iraq, they've never been the same since they came home.
posted by
microba
on April 7, 2006 at 8:00 AM
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You know.
The greatest warriors I know are samurais. they had strong discipline, and they were very gallant and fearless. Read my poems and send comments.
posted by
coolacen
on April 7, 2006 at 5:44 AM
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All to true
This passage rings true to the terrifying realization of war. Well done.
posted by
thelonelyroad
on April 7, 2006 at 5:21 AM
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