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FARSAILOR,
I enjoyed reading your poem and the melancholy thoughts that seemed to be here.  Thanks for sharing them.  I think this poem is well written.  :)

posted by BlackPearl1 on April 7, 2006 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

hiiii..
thank you for dropping by & leaving such a wonderful comment....& i must say this poem is  very poignant..& yet gives hope...soilders are the metaphors of human life....& you portrayed the thought very well..

posted by abhilasha on April 7, 2006 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely good work...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 7, 2006 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

this reminds me of a good portion of my friends who have joined the army, a couple were in iraq, they've never been the same since they came home.

posted by microba on April 7, 2006 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

You know.
The greatest warriors I know are samurais. they had strong discipline, and they were very gallant and fearless. Read my poems and send comments.

posted by coolacen on April 7, 2006 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

All to true
This passage rings true to the terrifying realization of war.  Well done.

posted by thelonelyroad on April 7, 2006 at 5:21 AM | link to this | reply