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so beautiful story each time fill me with pleasure...
with so much ...
posted by
drohan254
on February 15, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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Thanks
It never hurts to pop a flare and see who is about to dance.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 17, 2006 at 1:59 PM
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You may be pretty dark my friend, but I live in the darkness. I like it though, I knew what you were saying.
posted by
thelonelyroad
on April 16, 2006 at 3:41 PM
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My poor tired eyes, can hardly see at times........
Actually the phrase is refering to verbal encouragement, not verbal stimulation, dark minds see dark thought, but then I am pretty dark...
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 16, 2006 at 3:05 PM
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'Far Sailor' You write well my friend, but:
"At her urging, at times with tongue lashing or pleasing, I did climb"
me thinks you may be a dirty old man ? Good for you. (lol) WWP
I would also suggest trying one font size smaller, when type is that big the eyes have to move too far to fast to easily follow, and it interupts cadence and flow, just a thought.
no one else will understand this one, "I'm also rooting for 'Tame' WWP
posted by
WWPiMM
on April 16, 2006 at 2:53 PM
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Good work
I like the concept of realizing one's wings and flying.
posted by
avant-garde
on April 16, 2006 at 2:15 PM
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