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her father's doughter son of the swan is floating

posted by drohan254 on March 9, 2007 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

All the blame goes to a certain Victoria Morgan

Being a father is not always easy, it can be fun, it can be scary, it is always interesting. Her latest was when I dropped her off at school this morning, and then proceeded across state. She took my tax documents instead of her research material for a report due last week, What can I say about those acorns... As for paragraph breaks, be careful I have a couple of really boring epic sagas I can inflict upon an unsuspecting world with lots of breaks..

posted by FARSAILOR on April 17, 2006 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

FARSAILOR

You did well. It is not easy for parents to let their children be to learn things for themselves. To often we are so set on telling them how to do every little thing or insist on doing it for them so it will be right.

posted by TAPS. on April 17, 2006 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

a real poem

posted by MsVision on April 16, 2006 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

insightful...though I don't speak from personal experience

there are times when we who are parents/guardians, just need to let go and let our children experience life for themselves. The hardships and the joys. Much like birds when they knock the chick from the nest in the tree and let them fly solo. Enjoyed the poem very much

posted by penguinrock26 on April 16, 2006 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

Msg so well brought home that we must let girls live their lives

and overprotection is uncalled for.

posted by Straightforward on April 16, 2006 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

Just hit return at the end of sentence

where you want a break before posting. WWP

posted by WWPiMM on April 16, 2006 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, I am not blessed with children, or perhaps

there are souls that are more blessed, not having me as their father. ( ? )

It looks better right. Now just put in paragrapgh breaks as needed, also easier on the eyes then looking at a BLOCK of words like that.