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one of the truest statements. People call me crazy for liking the rain, but it is for what it does, not its beauty.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 23, 2006 at 2:48 PM
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Rain washes away the old and nourishes the new....
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posted by
A-and-B
on April 23, 2006 at 2:23 AM
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Teddypoet
Thank you, for the comment, my friend (that makes me feel old saying that, I don't know why) LOL.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 9:17 PM
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kushie
I must say, I wish I was you, except of course I would be the boy, not the girl. I don't like getting pissed off, it gets really annoying when it happens. Glad you like it.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 9:14 PM
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Passionflower
I think the rain must be a popular topic, because yours is the second poem/story I was told was similar to this one. Thanks a lot. : )
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 9:13 PM
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Superb, my friend...brilliant work indeed.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 22, 2006 at 7:59 PM
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this was very well written...
sometimes I feel like I am walking through darkness...I am the bright-eyed smiley girl and it seems so many around me (especially at work) are so dark and gloomy...When moodiness rubs off on me, that pisses me off because I let it happen...! great post!
posted by
kushie
on April 22, 2006 at 7:56 PM
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Enjoyed this very much--
I've written something similar called "This Rain". It's about depression and walking thru the darkness.
posted by
Passionflower
on April 22, 2006 at 7:42 PM
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Okey Dokey
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 6:28 PM
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Will do, PR, I'll keep on pulling!
posted by
Blanche.
on April 22, 2006 at 6:26 PM
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Blanche
Thank you, and I don't mind if you are pulling my leg, or whatnot. It doesn't hurt. LOL
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 6:21 PM
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Penguinrock,
I am enjoying pulling your leg. How would you know that Stevie is a woman's name if you weren't familiar with her work. Anyway, the poem is truly amazing.
posted by
Blanche.
on April 22, 2006 at 6:18 PM
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sassyass
me too, though I just realized I spelled beaucoup wrong...somehow or other I am in the French Honor Society.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 6:16 PM
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Ooh la la
I love french.
posted by
Sherri_G
on April 22, 2006 at 6:13 PM
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sassyass
Merci beacoup for liking the poem.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 6:04 PM
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Blanche
I am sorry. I don't think you are old, I am just not acquainted with the world. I think I have gender distinguishing problems. I did that earlier in an A-and-B comment I left them. OOPS
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 6:03 PM
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I like it
This is good stuff!
posted by
Sherri_G
on April 22, 2006 at 5:59 PM
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OMG, that's it, I am officially OLD, Penguinrock,
Stevie Nicks is a she, from Fleetwood Mac. I thought your Mom might have had a copy of Rumors when you were growing up. That's it, sign me up for shuffeboard.
posted by
Blanche.
on April 22, 2006 at 5:56 PM
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Blanche
I will not mortify you, I'll look him up instead. LOL. That is an honor though. Thank you.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 5:53 PM
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Penguinrock,
Words from another immortal bard, Stevie Nicks (please do not mortify me by saying "who?"): "When the rain washes you clean you'll know". Indescribable bliss and you've captured it so well.
posted by
Blanche.
on April 22, 2006 at 5:44 PM
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Katray
I am on a nearly constant spiritual path, a place to belong. I am glad that you didn't find it to have too much emotion
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 5:41 PM
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No I don't PenguinRock
A journey through despair into cleansing and heaven touched hope. A spiritual message I feel. And paths most of us trek. Very reaching.
Good!
posted by
Katray2
on April 22, 2006 at 5:29 PM
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I am glad you are impressed shelly
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 5:25 PM
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Thank you katray
do you think I might have put too many emotions in my poem? I am glad you think that it is excellent.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 5:25 PM
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wow.....that was good.
posted by
shelly_b
on April 22, 2006 at 5:02 PM
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So many emotions coursing through PenguinRock
and touching the reader deep. Yes, excellent I think!
posted by
Katray2
on April 22, 2006 at 5:02 PM
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blackcat
I'm glad you like it
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 4:37 PM
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thanks lilaznthug
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 22, 2006 at 4:36 PM
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pretty good! : )
posted by
-blackcat
on April 22, 2006 at 4:34 PM
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nice written
posted by
lilaznthug85
on April 22, 2006 at 4:24 PM
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