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good work
posted by
shypettite
on June 6, 2006 at 8:05 PM
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i ponder that question myself. very good work!
posted by
shylow
on May 21, 2006 at 9:40 PM
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What can I do so the sun can
Vey nice work keep it up
posted by
Kat02
on May 20, 2006 at 10:18 AM
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wise and compassionate.
posted by
markng
on May 19, 2006 at 5:23 PM
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Good poem....
if only we could do as much as we want.
posted by
macphilips
on April 27, 2006 at 11:15 PM
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This is a very nice poem .. I can relate with how you are feeling.
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 27, 2006 at 6:27 PM
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A nice sentiment.
We all do nice things, yet we don't seem to be able to get along.
posted by
JasonScyte
on April 24, 2006 at 10:00 AM
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hiii..
this is very beautifully written and much different from the ones you have written so far....keep up...
posted by
abhilasha
on April 24, 2006 at 1:50 AM
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Good poem
Too much sun is dangerous.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 23, 2006 at 4:12 PM
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