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posted by
A-and-B
on April 27, 2006 at 2:38 PM
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"Can that which is heavenly be described by a word..."...
Bravo, my friend...Bravo and bravo again.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 24, 2006 at 9:51 PM
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Very interesting PenguinRock
Romantic in it's own way.
posted by
Katray2
on April 24, 2006 at 6:43 PM
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A-and-B
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 24, 2006 at 3:44 PM
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Mademoiselle
That is actually just like myself, I have the worst times with commas, and punctuation., that is actually the primary reason that I haven't put any punctuation in the last couple poems. I like your little quote.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 24, 2006 at 3:44 PM
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posted by
A-and-B
on April 24, 2006 at 2:06 PM
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Well, there's always spell check ...
I wish there was a "grammar check", as well, actually ... because, though an excellent speller, I tend to go way overboard with the commas. I try to write exactly as I talk, so I just toss them in whenever I would naturally pause. However, apparently, that isn't grammatically correct.
"Me fail English?! That's unpossible."
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 24, 2006 at 1:25 PM
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mademoiselle
thank you for telling me about the typos, consider them fixed...yeah that was what I meant. I can't type very well.
posted by
penguinrock26
on April 24, 2006 at 1:10 PM
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It's a pretty poem ...
There are a few typos, though:
"It ries to leave"
Also, no such word as "concerrence" exists ... so, I assume you meant "concurrence"?
"St. Ekaterina of Bryn Mawr"
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 24, 2006 at 1:07 PM
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