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lilaznthug85 --thanks friend Joe.
posted by
scriber
on April 27, 2006 at 12:54 PM
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ahh its scriber and his fantastic poetry
posted by
lilaznthug85
on April 27, 2006 at 6:55 AM
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A-and-B --it isn't always wise.
posted by
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on April 26, 2006 at 2:29 PM
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cage2mad--finally, a modest writer. lol. thanks.
posted by
scriber
on April 26, 2006 at 2:28 PM
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How many are brave enough to come clean in writing? Lol.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on April 26, 2006 at 1:21 PM
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Mademoiselle --a pudenda is something all women have and men like.
as for the space, not sure why, but thanks, and i did correct it.
usually i write and rewrite quite a lot. thanks for your comments also.
posted by
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on April 26, 2006 at 9:33 AM
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Whoops! Forgot the subject line (sorry):
This poem was really cool.
"Still on lunch break."
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 26, 2006 at 9:28 AM
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Though, why do you have two spaces between "fed" and "from his memory"? Is that for effect?
Oh, and what's a "pudenda"? (Large or otherwise.)
"On lunch break."
posted by
Mademoiselle
on April 26, 2006 at 9:27 AM
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10/10 - thats all im gonna say cuz i ain't worthy! - CJM
posted by
cage2mad
on April 26, 2006 at 8:36 AM
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