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Smooth flow of words in verse and prose. 10 clicks are here. Thanks for your helpful start for the pic prompt.

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posted by A-and-B on May 18, 2006 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

She has him too preoccupied to write new poetry? Lol. Thanks for writing the joke. Your clicks are here.

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posted by A-and-B on May 18, 2006 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

nicely done.

posted by shylow on May 17, 2006 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

well written

posted by star4sky5 on May 17, 2006 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

A-and-B --thanks much for clicks and comment

posted by scriber on May 17, 2006 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

10 clicks are here. Much thanks.

posted by A-and-B on May 17, 2006 at 4:11 AM | link to this | reply

Poem has deep introspection. He knows too much for his own good and yet he can't swim against the tide.

posted by A-and-B on May 17, 2006 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply

FARSAILOR --thanks for comment to the mark.

posted by scriber on May 16, 2006 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

AandB--haha, right, I am not a true vegetarian.

posted by scriber on May 16, 2006 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

AN ARTIST MUST PERFORM AS HE SEES FIT, THAT IS THE NATURE OF ART.

posted by FARSAILOR on May 16, 2006 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

Vegetarians who know the taste of meat will not return to greens.

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posted by A-and-B on May 16, 2006 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Not to beat a dead horse, but...

This one was really amazing, because it focuses more on the mental misery created by love (sort of), rather than simply on the crude carnality conceived from lust.

Don't go around tonight,
Well, its bound to take your life,
There's a bad moon on the rise.

posted by Mademoiselle on May 16, 2006 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply