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i like this alot.
posted by
shylow
on May 20, 2006 at 12:10 AM
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Write Life to the Fullest
This makes me want to do more with my life! It has a sadness to it, mainly because it appears he led such a full life, and life that's coming to an end that no one cares about as the action is now elsewhere. I like your use of commas, they hold the reader's attention more to each line. 
--Shawn, "Tall and Skinny Poet"
posted by
TallAndSkinnyPoet
on May 18, 2006 at 2:49 PM
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