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A show within another show becomes an overshown show. 12 clicks for your second contribution. Thanks!

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posted by A-and-B on May 25, 2006 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

mark2556---lol.

posted by scriber on May 25, 2006 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Short asses.
Phroawr!  

posted by mark2556 on May 25, 2006 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

A show of 12 clicks for this show.

Thanks for your writing contribution in my blog.

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posted by A-and-B on May 25, 2006 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

Good Language, Keeps You a Little Off Base
This is something different in theme and language, so I really enjoyed it.  The narrator describes without showing a lot of pride for what he's seeing - you have a nice balance there. 

  --Shawn, "Tall and Skinny Poet"

posted by TallAndSkinnyPoet on May 25, 2006 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

An old show becomes part of the backdrop. Regular patrons will lose interest.

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posted by A-and-B on May 25, 2006 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

posted by NAJWA on May 25, 2006 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

you sure do know how to tell a good story.  great stuff.

posted by shylow on May 25, 2006 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply

well written
descriptive

posted by Dolphinlover78 on May 25, 2006 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

i am learning from you

posted by naorem on May 25, 2006 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply