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Ariel,
your prose is sheer poetry! I love it, and although this idyll will end tragically, I am eagerly waiting for what is to come...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 4, 2006 at 6:12 PM
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Reality is their sole betrayer. Nice story.
(A)
posted by
A-and-B
on June 4, 2006 at 2:04 PM
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Really? *scoff, scoff*
posted by
Blanche.
on June 4, 2006 at 12:54 PM
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Blanche again
Ariel blushes deeply.Why, thank you very much. It's just come to me ; the scathing reaction of a certain person to this story. I'll post it later on
posted by
ariel70
on June 4, 2006 at 12:48 PM
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Ariel, I love your chivalric language and poesy,
Tristan and Isolde have nothing on this pair!
posted by
Blanche.
on June 4, 2006 at 12:46 PM
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Ariel70,
You are very welcome. It is heartfelt.
posted by
RAME
on June 4, 2006 at 12:38 PM
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RAME
This story ( like a few others of mine )began life as a long poem, taking up an entire A4 sheet. It's now over 6,000 words. Get a bit carried away at times, I guess! I might just post the poem later on.
Thank you for your fulsome praise, it is much appreciated
posted by
ariel70
on June 4, 2006 at 12:30 PM
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Ariel70,
I haven't been at the computer for a week or so now and haven't read part one of this post. I did enjoy reading this one, though. You write such poetic prose! I keep waiting for rhymes and stanzas. You, my friend, are very talented and a joy to read.
posted by
RAME
on June 4, 2006 at 12:26 PM
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