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I enjoyed them both
posted by
white-cossack
on June 8, 2006 at 3:55 AM
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Love it! Keep Blogging!
posted by
Sabsline
on June 7, 2006 at 4:06 PM
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I agree with the previous comment
posted by
markng
on June 7, 2006 at 6:26 AM
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A very neat rhythm! Ther are a couple places where the verb doesn't agree with the subject, but if you did that for meter, then I'm cool with it. An interesting perspective of a clock...sounds like you thought of it right before you went to bed. Très bien! Cricket ><>
posted by
pkcricket
on June 7, 2006 at 4:48 AM
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