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both extremes
you do pretty well with the extremely short and the extremely long. Though I did find the my attention wavering through the length.
posted by
markng
on June 22, 2006 at 11:56 PM
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stbond...
You took me on a trip, that is for sure. Wow!
I must ask, do you listen to the music/poetry of Jim Morrison? I do see shades of his work in your great talent and, I must say, that this poem has to be a favorite of mine...
Very good work, stbond. And thank you for sharing it.
posted by
bwFrampton
on June 20, 2006 at 5:37 PM
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astoundingly good!
What tension! What visuals! So many lines I love. I should be paying for the gift of reading this and you should be paid to write like this! I love the associations, the slow evolution of mind and matter. What is more real, the mountain or how we feel about the mountain? Obviously, both. This poem came out just right right - it captured both. Well done. Fine poety. Denise
posted by
QueenMaeve
on June 20, 2006 at 2:38 PM
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Thank you very much. . .
I'm working on it.
posted by
stbond
on June 18, 2006 at 8:01 AM
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You write excellent poetry with great details and fresh words. I hope
you try to publish this and your other works, if you haven't already!
posted by
Ariala
on June 18, 2006 at 7:37 AM
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