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What a cute poem!
posted by
markng
on June 29, 2006 at 4:58 AM
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Haiku to you too you know who. Don't mind if I try?
Sunflower Sowing
sunshine on pretty planet
Gold in my pocket
Radiant sunflower
Looking sunwards begging for
A sweet saffron kiss.
Golden treasure
Will you be my sun
glowing brighter still?
posted by
marieclaire66
on June 26, 2006 at 1:01 AM
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MarieClaire - Your comment below to Tall and Skinny Poet is at least as creative, artistic and poetic as your main work! I like the way you think! Samhain_Moon 
posted by
syzygy
on June 25, 2006 at 11:13 PM
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Cheeky is the word.
When the first line came into my head, I did not know what to do with it, so I had to find a friend for it, because it was a little lonely, then I found some brothers and sisters for this poor lonely verse! I know I am a little crazy, but that's the way I like it.
posted by
marieclaire66
on June 25, 2006 at 11:00 PM
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This Ends Up Being Affectionate...
...which I really like. This whole thing is a nice way to say something else - very endearing, very good word choice.
--Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"
posted by
TallAndSkinnyPoet
on June 25, 2006 at 10:48 PM
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