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Sorry did not mean to insult anyone.
posted by
marieclaire66
on June 27, 2006 at 11:42 PM
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I don't know what you mean.
I am upset because people misinterpret what I am saying. This is my journey I am writing about, the loss of my son, not some fluffly flight of fancy. I feel people are trampling all over my feelings. May be I should keep them to myself. Sorrow is very real, only people who have been through it know what I am talking about. The nice poem dear just does not cut it. It is not a nice poem at all. It is full of pain and hope. May be I am a lousy writer.
posted by
marieclaire66
on June 27, 2006 at 9:49 PM
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I thought I detected a different kind of sorrow here, but if wrong...well
I don't like to be wrong. Beautifully written but I wish it had a happier theme. Oh well, poetry is like that! Good job!
posted by
swftfox
on June 27, 2006 at 9:31 PM
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Trés jolie
posted by
stbond
on June 27, 2006 at 9:55 AM
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Hope and trust are spirit in action restoring the (inner) child, the sunshine, the rudder. Beautiful poem. Samhain_Moon 
posted by
syzygy
on June 27, 2006 at 5:54 AM
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